MC - Typos, confusing ability text, grammer etc
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10-10-2006, 04:20 AM (This post was last modified: 10-10-2006 09:09 AM by masamunemaniac.)
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RE: MC - Typos, confusing ability text, grammer etc
Okay then, ninjitsu is an acceptable variant of ninjutsu.


SP-39 Arachnid
Current Text Wrote:Allying 6: [Touch Of Death
75%, otherwise: SP-39
deals damage to a
monster, that monster
doesn't undizzy next]
Reword Proposal? Wrote:Allying 6: Touch Of Death
75%, If SP-39 damages
a monster in combat
it is dizzy-locked

I feel there's no need for the 'otherwise' - after all, you can't dizzy something that's dead anyway, can you? Removing that should erase confusion as that led to people thinking it had a <6 Allying ability (wasn't just me), and also removes the brackets (it doesn't need to build character).



Anything else I've not mentioned?

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RE: MC - Typos, confusing ability text, grammer etc - masamunemaniac - 10-10-2006 04:20 AM

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